i framed
our illusion
with fleeting peals
of idealized
allusion
a restless zeal
lavishly adorning
lucid visions
elusive
so obscenely ornate
even
the great daydreamers
shuddered
hushed
beneath clouds
of shamble
wept shadows
shed
without shame
Max, or Not 
This is beautiful :)
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This reminds of the words I expressed and how foolish I feel now looking back. I wonder if they were foolish and wasted sometimes, but that’s what I felt and it just poured out. I enjoyed this.
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A great piece with a great beginning and a better closing. Well done.
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Wonderful
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Beautiful 👍🏼
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Thank you for your consideration
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It’s a pleasure.
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