no woman chooses.
the word “choice”
is a quaint affectation
of male privilege
one that shifts
the burden
onto the woman’s shoulders
with a simple
single syllable
of sinister
silver-tongue
that speaks volumes
of the depraved disconnect
of daddy’s deflection
defecting
neglecting
such wretched
subjection
to misogynist mindsets
that fret
at any hint
shown to impede
its quest for glory
its aweless reverie
of his requisite bequest
that rests for no burden
not even those wrought
by its own wanton hands
with nary a thought
for the “choice”
lies with man
to own up to his deeds
to reap what was sown
beyond his own base needs
choosing not to desert
to then foster a trust
that would honor what is just
by accepting
the circumstance born
of his lust
he must stand tall supinely
to shatter all doubt
in the matters regarding
the wrath of his route
for women most oft
are forever distraught
abandoned
bereft
left exploited
with naught
whilst these men prance
with ease
frolicking fancy-free
fleeing scene
with the breeze
having sown their ill-seed
for their ego
surpasses all
with such vomitous gall
as a life is forestalled
ne’er to answer the call
so appalling this trait
leaving life in its wake
only flight will he take
once his whim has been slaked
without further adieu
in a cloud of hot dust
and a fervid salute
served most proud and abrupt
rendering hearts nonplussed
like a billowing gust
once his will has been thrust
turns militantly brusque
with such fierce flippancy
throws all under the bus
in a thunderous peal
it’s a wonder surreal
as the moment reveals
what his true heart conceals
but there is no appeal
to that which cannot feel
so this dastardly deal
is so masterfully sealed
as a bastard is reared
in a fluster of tears
with a father not there
never bothered to care
not a moment to spare
to prevent all the fears
wrought by scrutinous stares
lurid thoughts turpid lots
from a surrogate’s leer
innocence left defenseless
for reasons so senseless
a treasonous pretense
to heathens demented
still lacking incentive
to try to prevent this
fate of such portending
consequence unending
of futures surrendered
no suture could mend
ill-repute so contentious
yet still men dispute
and refute their subjection
and all for the sake
of their putrid compulsions
so duly revulsing
profanely effusive
the lives left behind
are not those
which they must live
and thus it is a shit
for which they do not give
so willing to forfeit
the world they created
but for a mere moment
of fleeting amusement
that spurns an entire
existence
so uselessly
suffered for naught
and for what
but their ego’s
egregious gestalt




You’re like the Chuck D of our group. Just a wordsmith savant. I wholeheartedly champion the cause of which you are so loquaciously defending
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Oh mister, you’re far too kind. Though now I’m inclined to reveal the true depths of my parodic affliction… the following is the result of food service servitude and a restless devolution: this may sully my dubious reputation lol https://m.soundcloud.com/polar_division/fuq-yo-shit
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this is great!! LMAO! I was a pro chef for 20 years, and I have worked every position in a restaurant. I know where you are coming from, exactly!
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the song’s parodic spirit is hopefully conveyed. for i should die were anyone to ever think it serious hehe [srsly though]~
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Lol
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It is only due to the tremendous consideration and support you have shown me that I feel comfortable revealing this. Thank you for everything Dennis. I appreciate the hell outchu!!!
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by the way, the rhymes are good, but I much prefer your poetry language ;p
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heh, as do i. that was many years ago. if only i had felt then that i could ever dream to write. thank you for listening. yet another layer of our shared experience has revealed itself. lol. such anguish has earned us a plume of the heavens. or at least that we should never have to go through that shit again!
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Mad word smithing with a powerful message from Max Meunier-Dissociative Void
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You’re are a brilliant wordsmith
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Great poem Max
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I get it, my daddo left us out to dry like a wet newspaper~
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I’m sorry that your family had to suffer such circumstances. My heart is with you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
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Thanks Max :) I’m actually grateful to have learned that all our experiences carve a greater depth to our understanding about how truly significant life is.
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Yes!!!!!!!!!!!! Give me life! Definitely sharing this!!
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Thank you so much for your kindness and understanding. Your words inspire me to continue writing.
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I am in awe of you, and of your stunning giftedness…what a brilliant mind put to such generous use!!! Thanks for sharing :)
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I appreciate your words more than I can express. You are far too generous! Nonetheless, I am thankful for your consideration.
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You deserve every accolade :)
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