in spite
of mountains
of might
air
bears no impression
for years
we watched
lying rigid
in piqued
anticipation
every time we looked
away
the day had since fallen
even still
do we burn
holes in the ceiling
retraversing every misstep
I Prefer Not To.
I love your writings
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Thank you, Aakriti.
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Hmn…. Inspite of mountains of might
Air bears no impression…
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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I’m happy to have struck a chord, however sad the context.
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Beautiful..
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Thank you for your kind sentiment.
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Max this is so moving and beautifully written my friend
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Thank you, Candice. Your kind words are very much appreciated.
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So much depth of thought in few words. Astounding Max 👍👏❤
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Your words describe a station beyond that of my own. I am forever grateful for your kindness.
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